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sparrow2000 ([personal profile] sparrow2000) wrote in [community profile] summer_of_giles 2018-06-17 07:39 pm (UTC)

Baby watcher Wesley is so wonderful in all his glorious ineptitude.

Really liked the moment of recognition and connection through the glasses cleaning - that was a lovely unexpected capstone to a familiar scene.

One tiny comment. At the top, the first couple of lines are repeated twice - not sure if that's an accident or a deliberate repetition - ignore me if it's the latter, but I thought I'd mention it in case it's a formatting issue.

Look forward to reading more.

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