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protoneoromantic ([personal profile] protoneoromantic) wrote in [community profile] summer_of_giles 2018-06-15 01:19 pm (UTC)

Good job with the emotional content here. The frustration really comes across. Prurient is an awfully strong word here though, unless you want to communicate that sex is both trivial and disgusting.

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