Sorry just getting around to reviewing the end of this. I've been sporadically reading and writing over the last few days.

I was waiting for the grand disaster in this part, but was glad to see it go as smoothly as it did. I loved the way that Buffy pulled back when she realized what she was doing, and I really liked your Devon characters and in particular Minerva with her 'time will tell' at the end. Sounds appropriately cryptic.

I'm looking forward to your follow-up.

Thanks for taking the time to share this. Well done!