ext_67941 ([identity profile] julsiggy.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] summer_of_giles 2012-06-03 04:14 pm (UTC)

You know, I never really considered this pairing, but this is very well written and I have to say I enjoyed reading it.

I really like the depth of feeling that shows through - Giles' own displacement and insecurity, and the progression of how bit by bit Wesley becomes less an outsider, and Giles isn't quite sure how he feels about that for multiple reasons.

And I especially loved this line - "He checks on his children, and no they are not his, and no they are not children, but yet they are both." That's beautifully perfect.

Well done.

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