This one turned out really well, I think. The narrative moved along nicely, and I liked the way you gave them a little time alone to realize the potential in their relationship.
The postcards were an especially nice touch- weirdly romantic, and she just *would* expect him to be able to figure it out!
As usual, I am delighted with your work. And you get an extra Jammie Dodger since it's your birthday and all! (gives cookie)
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This one turned out really well, I think. The narrative moved along nicely, and I liked the way you gave them a little time alone to realize the potential in their relationship.
The postcards were an especially nice touch- weirdly romantic, and she just *would* expect him to be able to figure it out!
As usual, I am delighted with your work. And you get an extra Jammie Dodger since it's your birthday and all! (gives cookie)